2011年10月14日金曜日

Essay 2-01a: Favorite place




I'm typing about favorite place. I have a many favorite place. Especially, I have a favorite certain general store and swimming club. First, this general store is very good place and friendly. Sometimes, I buy sundry goods. The week before last, I bought a piece of clothing and key ring. I bought a piece of clothing was made in Thailand and key ring was made in Thailand too. The general store is get in Thailand and Bali. Then, this general store is a delight full smell. For example, fragrance of lavender, rose, herb and so on. It is makes me happy and relax. I want to get it, but I have no money. When I come to think of it, I have been order two goods from a general store.

Second, this swimming club is full of precious memories. I had a good workout with my swimming friends and I scolded by a swimming coach. At the training, our swimming coach was beat with a kickboard. I ached all over and I felt like a crying. I wanted to give up and I wanted to truant training. But, if I hadn’t swimming, I couldn’t meet swimming friends. Then, I was good for nothing. I was training ever after. When I was elementary student, I advanced to the final. I swam the breaststroke. As a result, I won third prize in schoolchild Olympic. I was very surprised and I was very remedial student in swimming club. I thought, it will become, it is accomplish. Thanks to coach, I can swim very fast and I became to love swim. But, I retired from active service last year. Sometimes, I go to nearby a heated pool but I’ve been very busy lately. Also, I became a lack of exercise. Fatty headlong and get fat on my body. I want to develop my muscles by doing exercises. Then, I want to swim once more. Finally, I appreciate what you’re done for me and I will owe coach, friends and swimming senior. These are my favorite place.                           (348words)

3 件のコメント:

  1. I don't like swimming club.

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  2. Which store is your favorite and where it is in?
    I think you should write five paragraphs.

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  3. You have many favourite place? Sounds nice. How many times do you go there in one month? Please tell me the place where it is.

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