My treasure

 I’m writing about my treasure. First, I have a lot of my treasure. For example, family, swimming club sundry goods and clothes! Especially, my treasures are family and swimming club. First, we are family of five and we are all friendly! Sometimes, we are quarrel but we are made up a quarrel without notice. I think that when I was felt down, my family stimulate me and guide me. So I will treasure my family and I will repay my family absolutely.

  Second, my treasure is swimming club. When I was three years old, I started swimming! I commuted swimming club very hard also I practiced about three hours! My coach is passionate parson. Also, I was hit kickboard by him so I was crying every day. I though that leave swimming every day but my coach said to me, you shouldn’t give up what you have started. So, I went on practice. Then, when I was 9 years, I won a prize on breaststroke. I was very surprised and my coach was surprised too. So he said to me, effort not betrayed. His words made a deep impression my mind and I owe what I am to you. 


 Then, I didn’t like swimming but I became like swimming without notice also if I didn’t start swimming, I didn’t have my special talent! Then, I didn’t make many friends. Finally, I will repay coach, friends and superiors too. So, I want to see coach and friends at once! Thank you for reading!

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